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Could you rate this poem for me?
Posted: Sat Aug 04, 2007 12:00 pm
by Halloween_Girl
IT'S HALLOWEEN!
Pumpkins with cut out smiles, decorations that go on for miles!
Trick-or-treaters on their way, so there is only one thing thing to
Say, Happy Halloween, look at those stars gleam! Ghost and
Witches, Vampires, and pumpkins, its Halloween to my assumption!
Posted: Sat Aug 04, 2007 12:13 pm
by Halloween_Girl
PLZ PLZ PLZ, vote! :(
Posted: Sat Aug 04, 2007 10:04 pm
by One Eye'd Jack
Yes, Halloween girl, I do like you're poem. Have you written any others? If not this is a really good first try. I've never thought about rhyming pumpkins with assumption before but, ya know, now that I've read it, it kind of works. Good job!
Posted: Sat Aug 04, 2007 10:52 pm
by Haunted Horseman
Nice first poem. Keep it up. Love to read Halloween poems.
Posted: Tue Aug 28, 2007 8:59 pm
by Halloween_Girl
I have MANY more trust me! I post some more if you want!
Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 12:27 pm
by Haunted Horseman
Always interested in reading new poems. Keep 'em coming.
Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 4:50 pm
by Halloween_Girl
k,
Little princesses, a lion with a mane. LOOK! Spiderman with Mary Jane! Children running from house to house, oh look a country mouse! Ladies in waiting Tigger and Pooh. Look at that! It's the old lady in the shoe! With Jack-o-Lanterns lighting the way, there is only one thing to say," Look at this scene it's HALLOWEEN"!
probley not as good as the first but... I like it ! :)
Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 9:30 pm
by Halloween_Girl
Hush child listen here for this great holiday comes once a year!
Children run from house to house but trust me nothing will be
quiet like a mouse! This is your fiest yer of Trick-or-treating
and you and your friends will have this meeting. To run and trot
side by side and then look up to see the witches glide.