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The Bedtime Poem
Posted: Sun Sep 04, 2011 1:05 am
by Nostalgiascape
My cool bed whispers to me, lay low lay low
Its the time of night the reapers fly, dontcha know dontcha know
Lay your head down and rest me, warm and safe warm and safe
The reapers will not see you, they will strafe they will strafe
Walt Richters 9-2-11
Re: The Bedtime Poem
Posted: Fri Sep 23, 2011 6:18 pm
by Pumpkin_Man
That little ditty put a shiver or two up my spine.
Mike
Re: The Bedtime Poem
Posted: Sat Sep 24, 2011 11:50 am
by Jack Skellington
I Like! 
Re: The Bedtime Poem
Posted: Tue Sep 27, 2011 8:48 pm
by Nostalgiascape
Thank you guys.
Re: The Bedtime Poem
Posted: Mon Oct 31, 2011 7:19 pm
by ChaosChick
That was pretty good... I liked it. Has a musical feel to it. Keep up the work!!!
Re: The Bedtime Poem
Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2012 8:39 pm
by Nostalgiascape
Rock on. Thank you. I was thinking of old warnings and bedtime tales to to people or children.
Re: The Bedtime Poem
Posted: Mon Sep 10, 2012 12:31 pm
by witchy
Ohh!!! Now I have it stuck in my head, it is kinda catchy!! Luv it!!
Re: The Bedtime Poem
Posted: Mon Sep 10, 2012 2:41 pm
by Nostalgiascape
I only regret I cannoy edit the error where its says rest me when it should have said rest on me.. Thank you. Im glad its in your head.