Could you rate this poem for me?

[Halloween_Girl]

IT'S HALLOWEEN!
Pumpkins with cut out smiles, decorations that go on for miles!
Trick-or-treaters on their way, so there is only one thing thing to
Say, Happy Halloween, look at those stars gleam! Ghost and
Witches, Vampires, and pumpkins, its Halloween to my assumption!

[Halloween_Girl]

PLZ PLZ PLZ, vote! :(

[One Eye'd Jack]

Yes, Halloween girl, I do like you're poem. Have you written any others? If not this is a really good first try. I've never thought about rhyming pumpkins with assumption before but, ya know, now that I've read it, it kind of works. Good job!

[Haunted Horseman]

Nice first poem. Keep it up. Love to read Halloween poems.

[Halloween_Girl]

I have MANY more trust me! I post some more if you want!

[Haunted Horseman]

Always interested in reading new poems. Keep 'em coming.

[Halloween_Girl]

k,
Little princesses, a lion with a mane. LOOK! Spiderman with Mary Jane! Children running from house to house, oh look a country mouse! Ladies in waiting Tigger and Pooh. Look at that! It's the old lady in the shoe! With Jack-o-Lanterns lighting the way, there is only one thing to say," Look at this scene it's HALLOWEEN"!


probley not as good as the first but... I like it ! :)

[Halloween_Girl]

Hush child listen here for this great holiday comes once a year!
Children run from house to house but trust me nothing will be
quiet like a mouse! This is your fiest yer of Trick-or-treating
and you and your friends will have this meeting. To run and trot
side by side and then look up to see the witches glide.